Well a few things to improve but i still must give you creds for your luck with thems. Most of the oponents are totaly scrubs and teams like 5x dps, wish i had those in my BG :/

Anyway, way faster with target selection and fast deathgrip for preasure. Also dont be affraid to swap target midfight, dont pop CDs to erlie = waste of preasure. More focus on your palas HP, and i also agree with Mosg2's tip.