I'm far from a good movie maker, but I'd still offer some suggestions.

Lots of battles that you chose seem to have outnumber the opposition by a great deal, including other toons not controlled by you. Unless you're flashing big, shiny crits, it's not great fun to watch one dude get demolished by 7 toons (unless that guy wins).

I had trouble seeing the damage you're doing - maybe mods that show your party damage too, since lots of time the locks will show streaming damage instead of big hits.

GL making the movie I'll be watching the sequel when you're done!