2 Sojolly

Some suggestions:

Some of your CD are not ?ptimized IMO

we have 1.5 GCD (basically)

We have the following tanking ability CD
Shield of
Righteousness, 6s CD
Hammer of the Righteous 6s CD
Holy Shield - 8s CD 10s duration
Consecration, 8s CD 8s duration
Judgement of XXXX, 10s (9 or 8 talented)

so to maximize our TPS and uptime of HS, Consecration and judgements we need to build a maximum tight rotation possible
some of our ability have 4GCD duration/cooldown (SoR, HoR)
some are around 6GCD (consecration, Judgement, Holy shield) To match them all together we need to lower CD of Judgement by 1s (not 2 it is a waste of points) and DO NOT use glyph of consecration as it will complicate rotation and screw our 969696s cooldowns

The optimal rotation will be something like this (after the pull, plea and everything you want up to start with):
/Castsequence reset=combat Holy Shield, Hammer of the Righteous, Consecration, Shield of
Righteousness, Judgement of whatever, Hammer of the Righteous, Holy Shield,
Shield of Righteousness, Consecration, Hammer of the Righteous,
Judgement of whatever, Shield of righteousness. -> repeat

with such rotation we do not need complicated tanking macro and the only thing bad we have here - we have 1s without consecration as we can not get consecration to be exactly 9s CD 9s duration. All other abilities are fired on their CD (HS have 8s CD, but 10 s duration so we can afford to fire it 1s after the actualcd with no ill effects) We have almost no holes in this rotation (exept 1s without consecration).

As for the build i use for my pally - here it is:
http://www.wowhead.com/?talent#sZy0xA0uMGsIufzts0x0h

As you can see i have only one point in improved judgements (explanned above)
and i have no point in Improved hammer of justice or Judgenet of the just
With very tight ritation i have i really have no time to fire HoJ and I definately do not want mobs to hit me slower as the more they hit me - the more aggro i have on them (and some procs are tied to being hit)
As for the HoJ i use it as an additional way to get mob back to me if one of my toons get the aggro so i need it off CD when i need it. So i do not use it untill i really need.
I deliberately do not use glyph of consecration as it will spoil my rotation.

in comparisson with your build i have 1 point less in Divinity 1% less heal (not much)
but i have solid 5% more critical chance, +15% exorcism damage and 2% less mana cost for instant spells (and a free major glyph slot)