Just wondering what software you used to make it.
I think it's awesome for your first, better then I ever did. I would suggest (from memory) changing the video project to 720X360 NTSC DV 23 Frames. Would give provide a more crisp picture. In Vegas it's like the 4th one down 23.3 Frames. Can't tell you in Adobe as i'm at work.
That's not to be confused with rendering, this is for project settings only. I normally render uncompressed then Dr. Divx, but my way is very dated and I really need to get with the times.
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